jueves, 29 de octubre de 2009

Assignment five Crime


What can ordinary people do to help in the fight against crime?

For along time have existed bad people who have made terrible things but Nowadays our society has been big changes about technology so the life is faster than before then people always are walking quickly alone and speaking by cellphone it`s a big opportunity for thief because someone have been stolen on the street it likes doesn`t matter
so when the computers appeared people are waste all the time in theirs computers so they don`t have the chance of know who is living next to them and less which is the neighbor`s names.

On the one hand with those little informations we can how many people lives in our neighborhood moreover we can know when some people strange are hanging around our houses then if we see someone suspicious, we will send a report to the police with such characteristics of the men so the police will have information and search in their database.

On the second hand you can buy a dog provided that it doesn`t be a killer dog for example doberman or pitbull by the way they can kill you moreover the purpose of the dog is give a notice if some people that don`t be you ofcourse are inside the house however we can`t leave all responsibility to the cops because they have many work at the day then when we call the police they never be on time in the scene of crime.

In conclusion we mustn`t be carefree with our houses, we have to lock the doors and windows when we go out and before to sleep and if you have to travel or leave the house alone for along time you must say to your neighbor and the police it then if they see something strange in your house they will know that you aren`t however it is the best way that you can choose because you will be safe and you never must confront the crime yourself if you don`t want to result hurt by a knife or gun.

1 comentario:

  1. You've got some great ideas and you've attempted to use a variety of tenses and linking phrases. Well done!

    For along time have existed bad people who have made terrible things = Bad people,who do terrible things, have existed for a long time
    On the second hand you can buy a dog provided that it doesn`t be a killer dog = On the other hand you can buy a dog provided that it isn't a killer dog

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